You hurt my feelings
You ripped my heart in half
You let the tears fall upon me
And let my depression world crash,
I once was happy
Not a tear to be seen
Just a smile upon this face
When you stayed close to me,
You once kissed these lips
With yours upon mine
When the world stopped around
Because your kisses were so divine,
Thought that you loved me
Thought that you cared
My heart is very fragile
With the pain i endeared,
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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interesting
very nice write, rhymes good but the description lacks a tad ;p just one suggestion," I once as happy" doesn't really make sense but with a bit of editing this would be really cool.
Blessings and Luck
Matt
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