I see the lies,
behide your eyes.
You was part of me,
the part that set me free.
Your lies killed me on the inside,
showing the effect on the outside.
I loved you for who you are,
but the real you seems o far.
You changed and left me behide,
tearing apart my mind.
I cut myself to ease the pain,
letting my blood flow like rain.
I sit here and bleed while i think of you,
seeing my life slip out of view.
Death seems like the only way,
the only way to get away.
When i met you eveything changed,
having my life rearranged.
This isn't me,the on and true,
and all of this is because of you.
I will make you pay in return,
and eventually,hopefully, your burn.
Now that my heart has finally mended,
your life has now ended.
A contest entry
- Death by Anonymous Spark.
400 points, ended March 7, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I WANT ANYTHING! by Umi Juvariel.
4300 points, ended April 9, 369 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Interesting take on the feelings of death. It is not often I see this side. Excellent write and good luck in my contest.
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that was really good and i thought it was really well described
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