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Nature's Rage

A crack comes from the sky
followed by  a  flash of light
that almost blinds me
Nature's tears are free flowing
dancing down the window pane gently
The thunder is mad at the lightning
no one can quite figure out why
but at least when all is said and done
a rainbow will light the sky

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