this night,
without words
when I become folded
within the lotus bloom
you hold me sequester to your
silent hum
I do not see the moon or stars
for my eyes; fade upon
the naked dunes
this place-
my lips take refuge
with breaths …uneasy
while pleasures of love,
surface slowly,
we rise,
with morning’s sun
Author notes
the door of music
Please tell me what you think
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I have no idea how I came to this poem ...
but I guess it was predestined. Reading the essence of love is always a meaningful moment.
Love to you, Mal.
Myra
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Oh damn it, I knew it, talent! This is breathtaking and beautiful!
Georgia
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umm thank you georga...I cant help it...imma romantic
I have lotsa poems like this LOL
thanks for reading
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this is beautiful...the night, the day, love...unfolding like a lotus lily
~ Nicolette
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Wow this is so... it gave me butterflies... now if only all men would write poems and be all romantic but alas they are not. You are refreshing and it makes me smile.
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delicious with love penatrate the love
covers the minds eyes with many thoughts
of love and pleasure closed the eyes
so did the moon hugs Angel♥
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simple and sweet but had great meaning,,good job
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Still the seductive virgo Mally.
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WOW! that was wonderful...the sensenuality and devotion in these words...they are awe inspiring. Simplistic love with out strings or prenups....that is what this poem reminds me of.... simple lovely
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thank you for stopping by and commenting on this write...and yes...simplistic love, is truly love...it gives us wings
but eyes for only, the one
mal
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excellent expression
Your words are tender and sensual. I also love the usage of the words lotus bloom. You have created a very lovely passionate mood here in your poem.
Good luck in this contest!
Jeannette
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It pleases me to touch you with something wonderful and beautiful...and the mood is my intent
mal
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love to be foled inside a lotus blossom...how pretty.
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and who could resist having you folded in the bloom...
certainly not I
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lovely piece, so serene to read...like being at the beach, thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest...mm
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Very beautiful and sensual piece...was my pleasure to read. So much feeling in these few wonderful words.
Amy
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"when I become folded
within the lotus bloom..."
Mally, you curl my toes.
Honest to God.
Love, Lane
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This is sensuality at it's best...so subtle...less is indeed more. A wonderful take on the prompt. Bravo!
Mariana
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i like the title
It's very simple and suddle. Pleasures of love, makes me want to curl up in bed next to you.
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