Among white roses
fragrances of passion
grew as she slipped;
out of confinement
completely nude.
Enfolded within his
arms an sepia offering
tantalize's his goals;
on this cold cement bed
within her Eden.
Lust heard his whispers
of love, wantonness
birds didn't care!
Dwelling with nature's
flowers; his hands
touching curls
blooming into passion.
Desires moaned
softly, sexual-heat reeked
havoc with sweetness
on moments, days
they were alone.
Her sultriness
captured as he pruned
every orgasmic inch
of love's rose bush;
within his angel's garden.
Author notes
artist: Roger Jazelik-Hot day in the Garden.
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Comments
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Soft and sensual and sexy as all get out.
Now where the hell is my gardener
This is lovely, indeed.
Love,
jin
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Sexy indeed!
I love your subtle and sensual
metaphors, You drew me
in to this affair of the heart , mind
and body.
Outstanding!!
Good luck to you!
~Pastel
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hot....
DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ok ok..i give up, this is so sexy and sensual..wow congrats on the gold!
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"lust reeked
havoc with sweetness"
and...
"he pruned
every inch of
love's rose bush
in my garden"
awesome lines there...I thoroughly enjoyed the way you worked them.
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Very seductive and sensual and at the same time a piece that is above any reproach. You wrote a beautiful poem here.
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