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Cut Me

Can this blade cut me deep
So I can fall to your feet
Accept my defeat
This is complete

Cut me once
Cut me twice
Go ahead and steal my life
Kill this lie

You’re bruised
Way down deep
To the core
And I
Pulled you back into this life
One more time

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  • cool

    "your bruised way down deep to the core and i pulled u bac into this life one more time"
    i like that! this poem had alot of emotion!

  • good poem very emotional

  • This is very deep and emotional... thank you for sharing love

  • hmm... I don't understand why, when I was reading this, I tried to put it to "it's a small small world"
    lol
    anyways... good poem.


  • lovemedeath
    February 19
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    awwwww

    swweety this is great!! i loved itt!!!!

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