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For Her

And I love you
Say you love me too
Don't hesitate
And force me to wait
On something I've been hoping for
And kiss me before
I slip away
Into this matter of gray
Where I don't belong
And I'm forced to sing the song
Of sorrow

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  • very heart felt...!!!

  • this is such a good poem and very sweet

  • very nice

    sooooo sweet i like is this true have you really been through it???
    if so i am sooo sorry!!!


  • Jocelyn.Jaded
    April 20
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    <3 this is quite good. I really like it. ^.^

  • This was really beautiful!

  • Awww this is so beautiful. i like the rhyme here, unique and totally rhyming great shweet and passionate write

  • this is so sweet

  • babygurrrl
    March 19
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    hey i love u say u love me


  • lovemedeath
    February 20
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    awww!!! dear this is sweet an sad

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