my walls, crashing down around me
senses and emotions begin to fade
i gave you everything i had
but it wasn't enough to make you stay
can never let anyone have my heart
can't ever let anyone in
you've broken my heart into so many pieces
that i don't think it will ever mend
Please tell me what you think
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wow , in so few words you have expressed true heartbreak.
imperfection is what maes each of us perfect in our own ways. and if he cant see how perfect you are, how awesome you are. then he's blind.
you will be able to love again. there are people out tere who wont intentionally break your heart. its too bad he wasnt one of them
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I can understand this and I feel the pain you’re in,
You loved him so much, your gave him everything but everything gone in vain, I guess he will surly pay for this, one day he will stop and realize but it will be too late then, I can tell, no way he’ll ever find such a loving girl like you,
I believe there’s always someone out there for someone, who will take your heart and mend your pain
So don’t lose hope my friend
Take Care
Shuberth
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You have a great strong beginning, and good chosen words. Its quite well so far, its beartbreaking and sad. Great writing so far, hope you finish soon, I love to read the rest.
Sincerely,
XxDragonWolfxX
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