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c.h.a.n.g.e

f/a/l/l.
i.n.t.o  my a@r@m@s.

c:h:a:n:g:e  t^h^e w]a]y y[o}u
a.r.e

C'a't'c'h me
When I f~a~l~l.

This l_o_v_e were in
will c;h;a;n;g;e

When you
Are g\o\n\e

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  • xxSerendipityxx
    February 20, 2009
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    This is really good so far, cant wait to read the finished result


  • Lonely Christina
    February 19, 2009
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    good job at a dirty pretty! its a good start you should totally add to it sumtime