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{Ihateyou}[andimeanit]

You told me you loved me,
and i felt so special.
He told me he would die without me,
And i felt like someone.
i hate him,
this isnt a lie.
It hurts me,
but i cant tell anyone.
They'll laugh because of the past.
i hate him,
and i mean it.

Ugh.Pick me up, kick of my head and through my stem on the ground.

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  • LoranDevlin
    February 19, 2009
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    this is very good xx