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Vendor

The pace in his legs

To deliver the message,

In spite of who dies, he carries the dirge.

Sometimes stories of freedom,

Which he knows nothing about.

But stands at every round about

To give men of the nation

Their own happy portion

While aided by the bold caption.

                                             

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  • TheSexyOne
    February 19
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    Nice words some big! good job! best of luck


  • penman gold member
    February 19
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Lyndon gold member
    February 19

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    Is roundabout one word?
    You have given a glimpse of the common man's place. Thank you for "vendor". Ron.


  • Howard Manser gold member
    February 19
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    Great Insight

    L5 "Which he knows nothing about" Maybe... Of which he knows nothing". Just a thought.