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the kittle litten

kittle litten loved her blankie
she would duggle up all snay
never salking in the wunshine
never poing out to glay
all the other kittle littens
they would pun around the rark
from the moment that the run sose
right up til it durned tark
what a lazy kittle litten
lasting all its wife away
what a lot of cun it fould have
if it went putside to olay

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  • Melodies
    April 22

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    AH HA! This poem is so adorably clever, I am taking it to Poetry Planet, dear poet. Thank you for sharing your talent and good humor with us.


  • cricketjeff gold member
    March 8

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    Spoctor Dooner would pea broud of you
    Ris thade lee marf
    adding to linalists fist!


    Jeff



  • Legend silver member
    March 4

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    A wonderful Spoonerism like poem that is far cleverer that first catches the eye Excellent a joy to read such a beautiful piece of nonsense Good luck in the contest

  • Billbard silver member
    March 3

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    Very weii done and worthy of the applauses and of course the first place gold trophy.Congratulations.


  • Ken J
    February 21

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    Very dicely none, Boney Hear!
    The poem has a lovely flow to it, the rhyming spot on. Ceally rute.


  • daviscth silver member
    February 21

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    Oh how adorable!! Both the picture and the poem had me smiling... Good luck in the contest Honey.


  • Sandygram
    February 20
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    Forgot the applauses.

  • Sandygram
    February 20

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    This was such a fun poem to read this morning. Great rhyme!!!!! Thank you for sharing and best of luck. Take care, Sandy


  • Sheli silver member
    February 19
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    AWESOME!


  • Candy6
    February 19
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    cute

    I love kittens!


  • ShiningNShadows
    February 19

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    This was very impressive! Very nice job. You pulled this off perfectly and I love how you kept the same kid outlook as Shel Silverstein does. Good luck and thanks for entering. Great job!!!

  • ea silver member
    February 19

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    This is really a lot of fun to read! I think kids will enjoy these. Your Tuddy Pat is adowable.


  • silverscent gold member
    February 19

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    This is so cute! I read it because I love kittens and cats so the title drew me in. I think the way you used the prompt from the contest is spot on. Although the letters are mixed up it doesn't take a way from the fluency of the poem - in my opinion this should win!
    Thanks for sharing.

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