Don't apologize if you never really meant it.
Don't say anything, if it doesn't come from within.
Don't smile, if that smile isn't meant for me.
Don't be here, if it's against your will.
Don't let me keep you here.
Don't pretend to love me when you don't.
Don't be something you're not, just for me.
I can see straight through you.
And I know what's going on.
This is a lie, this is a shame.
This was never meant to be.
Leave me here all along.
The way I was meant to be.
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Written February 22nd, 2004
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Great poem - one I can relate to also. I like how it is very straightforward and honest, but yet doesn't come off hateful or angry.
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Awesome
I can relate so much, it's not even funny. When people say they're sorry, we want so much to believe them. But then just go back to doing the same sorts of things and won't listen when you try to talk to them. This is good, great job. -
I can relate a lot to this poem. People say they are sorry, but what do they do next? They turn around and do something even worse; hoping again you will forgive them. Very well written, please write more!
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Hey! This is a really good poem. I hate when people say they are sorry, but they are lying it makes you want to hit them. Anyways this was good keep writing, I hope to see more.
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this is a sad piece. unfortunately, i know what this is like. this is proabably one of the worst feelings there is to feel. knowing that the other person doesn't really love you; they don't even like you enough to tell you the truth about how they feel; they're too afraid to just be honest. it hurts...
good write, you got all of the feelings and thoughts out just they're really felt. -
Excellent
Wow..That Was An Awesome Poem...I Cam Relate To This In Many Ways...Good Job
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