Lustful looks smear
Cheap eyeliner under demanding eyes
Three sets of cocked hips
A pyramid of sinful snears
Not even trying to hide or disguise
Imminent restitutions to my prick
Just for being attached to my abdomen
Pry, rip and finally a tear
Last of my ragged and torn dignity
As the clothes float to the floor
Cruel, unruly and totally unfair
Heavy breath on thighs of piggish greed
No one can decide who's really the whore
Three to One, how I love it when I can't win
These twisted coil knots and bounds
Whisper fantasy and depravity to stained sheets
A blood rush to the head as I become lightheaded
Dirty, dirty narrative of sensations and sounds
To viscous liquids heating this throbbing seat
All my lusts and fears come true as I had dreaded
Now darkness as the blindfold goes on again...
Author notes
Ture story about getting jumped by three chicks and getting a bj bounded and blindfolded.
A contest entry
- Adult Quickie by Dragonbabyx3.
700 points, ended February 19, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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"A pyramid of sinful snears
Not even trying to hide or disguise" very good way to open this i like it
"Just for being attached to my abdomen
Pry, rip and finally a tear
Last of my ragged and torn dignity"
eh good description you leand out a form of agony i have yet to see anyone match..
"Dirty, dirty narrative of sensations and sounds
To viscous liquids heating this throbbing seat"
all these good descrption great effect to the overall feeling of the poem i think that this is very good quite ferious in the way that things are spoken..
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wow, i really like it.
very very nice
!~Renee~!
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*eek* Oh my my my... What a night!
*hug*
Delila
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Three to one huh? That was quite a night you had there! Great job with this prompt
and all the best to you with it here. Thanks
for sharing this one!
Jeremy0826 -
Well what a ride you had!
Very narrative piece of poetry
Bet you had fun
Good luck and best wishes Julie
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Niiiccceeeee! I enjoyed this write! Full of sexyness!
Why cant I get jumped by... nevermind Lovedddd it! (wonders why I did this kind of contest when I am all ready burnin up 
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