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Sweetheart

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I have always known
from day one my mind was blown.

Years past, I touched your hand
without you, my life would be bland.

Love discovered it brought us joy,
when we were told, we had a boy,

and still you are, my sweetheart.

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    February 19

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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    Great imagery that creates an easy flow to read.

    Welcome to Allpoetry
    I hope that you enjoy the site, and if you have any questions please don't hesitate to ask


  • Kathraina silver member
    February 19

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    Aww this is a very sweet write.
    Fantastic take on the prompt!
    Great imagery and flow, and very tender.
    Bravo!
    Thank you for entering and good luck


    ♥ Katie