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motionless

I was alone
until I met you.
Yours,
the only shoulder
that I knew.
I left
because
you made me cry,
And now
I can't drop
a single tear
without you,
I can't breathe without you here.








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  • k.a.s.s.i.e
    February 20

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    yea, i feel you totally. contradicting how someone is the reason for tears to come and not to come. ??? good write tho!

    kAsSiE


  • silverscent gold member
    February 19

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    This is brilliant! So simple, so subtle, so powerful. Isn't it amazing how someone can have such a hold on your emotions? You've portrayed that perfectly here.
    Thanks for sharing.


  • just mercedes gold member
    February 19
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  • Rain-Shot-Rose
    February 19

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    wow this was the poem i needed to read. this is exactly how i'm feeling right now...so bizzare. it's amazing how love can have such an effect on us....well done here my friend i can't even express to you how this made me feel like i wasn't so alone in feeling this way...