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Calan

Spending your nights alone
compared to a bed full of warmth and love.
All because of a selfish fathers actions,
your life is over.
All fake smiles are growing sparse
and yet my tears never run out.
I don't know which to protect
his (yours) life or mine.

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  • Shannon62875
    April 22, 2009

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    WOW!! Very good.. i know what it feels like to have a selfish father.. im really sorry!!! Keep up the amazing work... i feel your pain!! Thanks for entering!

    good luck in my contest

    Shannon*Leah