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Maybe Tomorrow

can't write;
stuck in my throat
like phlegm
yet my hand itches
to grab that pen

no movment;
yet my fingers
want to type
if only my mind
would let them

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  • mcheadle
    September 25

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    We all get these days.

    I think I may ask one of the grand kids if they want to learn office work . Mercy id this taking a chance. Yet one could get them starten young in life to something they can learn to like...mac Cong. on the gold.


  • Rita Krocha
    March 25

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    Wow, amazing write~ The title was catchy and of course, you always do justice with the contents


  • Salty Hibiscus gold member
    February 19

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    *movement. yes i agree, i am feeling it right now. i am running out of ideas of what to write. thanks for sharing.


  • whitenoise
    February 19

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    i have known that feeling many a time and this flowing work was not that time
    well wrote
    white


  • silverscent gold member
    February 19

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    I think we've all felt this at some point. Very well portrayed, and somewhat graphically in the first stanza. Thanks for sharing.


  • crimsondew
    February 19

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    well there you have it...wrote well even when you have a subject of not being able to write..

    All the best!


  • emo.kiss
    February 19
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    great write just how i feel at the moment ive got writers block lol

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