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Your breath teases my skin as you hold me.
Your fingers brush my cheeks,
Push strands of hair out of my deep blue eyes.
You pause to brush your lips over mine.
No time to linger.
Your bags are in the car, packed and ready to go.
You open your door and hesitate.
The tears in my eyes kill you.
A fleeting hope that you'll stay dies within me.
Your eyes graze my face.
You chose this already.
My knees buckle but this time you don't catch me.
You never move from the car.
I hit the ground and stare at your shoes.
I watch you turn and get in the car.
The door slams and makes me flinch.
The engine rasps and turns over.
You pull away and don't look back.

You made me hate you...


 

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