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Approaching Danger

quivering aspen
moved by invisible force
tornado's nearer

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A contest entry

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  • Lyndon gold member
    May 6

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    Interesting Haiku, poet.

    I have never seen an aspen in a tornado but I can imagine!
    Thank you for your entry and good luck.
    Ron.


  • Malabu
    February 19

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    excellent... i am happy to have inspired you hun...hope you are well?

    mally


  • Arkbear gold member
    February 18

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    Very nice Erika

     

    ...lots of movement and visual here....it will go to Finals....good luck!

     

    God bless,

     

    Bear ~