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All the Lonely Nights They Shared

Erratic lens
focus, refocus
get the right size
right width, right style, right height, and....
right smile.

Right lighting, mood, act
the perfect portrait
of a lovely couple.

And across the world
two people stand
in front of a fountain
dreaming of the future and the past.

All the lonely nights they shared.

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  • Heroesrox silver member
    March 23

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    Very good write. I like your wording, but can ya change the background....lol. Sorry to ask, but I had to highlight to read. Thanks for sharing and best wishes to you!


    • Enira
      March 23
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      Sure! Thanks for letting me know about the background. I'll change it for you. Thanks for the compliments. They encourage me to do better.


  • Wu Jingdong
    February 20

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    a simple and affecting poem,

    indeed, a lovely couple and fountain and photographing form a warm scene,althought the night's desolate.i like this concise way in it.


    • Enira
      February 23
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      Thank you very much for your comment. It really means a lot.