Like a waning tide,
my heart releases
its love to retreating
whispers of doubt…
it is free.
I wait with patience
for I know that my love
is true and will return.
Author notes
"If you love somebody, let them go, for if they return, they were always yours. And if they don't, they never were." -- Kahlil Gibran
Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: http://sheispretty.deviantart.com/art/Move-Me-97355091
30 – 60 words (32 words)
A contest entry
- Quickie #2! by Sweet Impatience.
1200 points, ended February 19, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome
Comments
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I really like the message this piece puts together, and the title is pretty appropriate, but not cliche. Great job!
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oh this was sad in the beginning but the ending was perfect for this picture and the quote..
congrats on the HM!!
Angel
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this is a beautiful poem.. I really love the last stanza, so true in so many ways.. I love the quote that you have in your AN.. It's a favorite of mine..
good luck
kat
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I so love your first verse.
A very beautiful write.
Well done Ken.
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The pic definitely works for that quote.. Nicely done.
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Letting go is the hard part.
This is beautiful Ken
Best of luck,
Love
Passions
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