Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

A Letter to Jane

You broke him
This is all your fault
You took him in, a virgin
Knew exactly what you were
doing- you used him
Everyone could see what you are
except him
With your beauty, you blinded him
and like Medusa,
you turned him to stone
And when you were bored
you cast him out
broken.

He found me- he knew
my limits were slackened
for him
He's known from day one.
He took me in, a virgin
I gave him everything
he used me
they warned me, but
with his beauty, he blinded me
I could not turn to stone
He broke me

I blame you

So, here I lay
in pieces- i need
someone to break
and that will be
your fault too.

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Princess-Petunia
    February 21

    Edit | Reply
    What goes around, comes around, and its normally true. this is a simple look at life but with all the complexities that follow emotional hurt.thankyou for my comment


  • Captain Jenny
    February 19

    Edit | Reply
    Great write. It's a shame that things like this happen... I enjoyed reading this

    ~Lae