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Finding Peace

Missing image

Looking high and then low

looking for a

peaceful flow

 

within the skies or here on earth

grasping for a

new found worth

 

all is found in love and grace

when reaching for

a peaceful place

 

a tender smile, a childhood friend

something special

to delve in

 

 

journey through time

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

pic prompt

http://sheispretty.deviantart.com/art/Grasping-Peace-66871963

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  • Starrchild777 gold member
    February 28

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    A piece worthy of tenderness both granted & received. Such elegance should not be finished with such a plain phrase. PLEASE, rewrite it? similar to 'transfixed in time' I know your more than capable of finding the perfect end-note.

    ~Starr~ xox


  • The Drifter
    February 19
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    Bravo, Bravo--such a sweet flowing poem-I love it !


  • JinSays gold member
    February 19

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    Gorgeous honey.
    You have the ability to make me like rhyme.
    This is probably my very favorite from you in a while.
    Love you.
    Jin
    and congratulations on gold, no question about it.


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    February 19
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    Peaceful rhyme, meaningful phrases, a peaceful flow to this poem. Well crafted!


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    February 19

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    this is absolutely beautiful, beyond it in fact. the imagery through out this piece is not only vivid but filled with hope.
    Perfect poem that you've penned..

    good luck
    kat


  • Denerica silver member
    February 19
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    Amazing, the emotions and imagery. Well written, and peaceful. Blessings.


  • cricketjeff gold member
    February 19

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    Beautiful peaceful poetry. Delicious take on the prompt and on life itself

    Great stuff



    Jeff


  • kooleyes
    February 19

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    this is so beautiful. the depth of your words are amazing. Thank you for the read and keep on writing


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    February 19

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    Aww this is just beautiful! Love what you did for this picture!


  • Jesann gold member
    February 19

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    This is just delightful..as is the pic prompt.
    Goes hand in hand with the prompt.
    Beautiful !!
    Well done.


  • HaleyMary
    February 18

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    This is beautiful. By far one of my most favorite poems that I've read in a long time. I love the flow of the poem and also it gives a sense of searching for peace and hope in life. Keep that pen flowing.

    Haley Mary


  • Griswold silver member
    February 18

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    Very nicely done for the prompt sweetheart, very soft and smooth, Best of luck in the contest. I love you...Scott


  • thejollytinker
    February 18

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    Little bit of a palpitation...it'll pass...you haven't killed me just yet. But the cat's breathing hard.


  • PureRomance
    February 18

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    This poem is absolutely beautiful. I loved the depth of the emotion in this and the imagery is astounding & amazing. You did a fabulous job with this. God bless you always in all you do and write and best of luck to you in the contest.


  • Mariana gold member
    February 18

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    'within the skies or here on earth
    grasping for a
    new found worth'

    I was going to choose this picture....it is so beautiful...your words echo its beauty. Bravo!

    Mariana


  • Kathraina silver member
    February 18

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    Aww this is so beautiful!
    I love the light heartedness in this piece!
    Great take on the prompt and good luck

    ♥ Katie


  • crimsondew
    February 18
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    All the best!


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    February 18
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