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Aubade 2

Soon ends the night
Dawn is in sight
We must take flight
Lose romantic height
Prevent lovelife blight
Take daytime respite
Until next twilight
Then fresh and bright
Resume our delight
With all our might
Love again all night


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Prompt,Night.15 line limit.

Also a Monorhyme.

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  • Love the Monorhyme, and thank you for putting both parts in your AN. Now...

    I'm not crazy about the structure, but the subject in which it is described is beautiful in its own right.

    Thank you for entering and good luck


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    February 18
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    wonderful rhyme. good luck!