"Nevermore"
Is what your raven said
But I say you are a fool
for my Raven says
"Forever more"
And thats how we shall be
"Forever more"
With each other
I may love what you have written Poe
But still I say
You are a fool
Forever more and beyond
Is how we shall be
Side-by-side
Holding hands
Facing everything against us
Forever more
Author notes
for the one
honest oppionion
Comments
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interstingly brilliant
this sheds light onto how you view other poetry . good work .
clara
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cool poem i liked that you uses the nevermore bird form the really old poem and i love how you contrassed it with forevermore ^^
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it was a little confusing.
Not in the bad way. it made me as a reader think nad idgest yuor wokr, a very good trait as a writter
The poem was lovely
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wow tipton, thats actuly sweet, didnt kno u could still say things like that... Who ever she is, hopefuly it lasts. u havent writen something so full of emotion n a while. its good. keep it up. i like knoing my friends r doing well.
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hey thanks abby, really thank you i hope it goes well to when ever your on go ahead and im me sometime
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