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Unspoken

close the door
walk away from it all
act as if it never happened
as if there was never anything there

close the curtain
walk off the stage
the show is over
and the there is no one left to play

shut the window
cut off the fresh air
go back to your cubical
and act as if nothing ever happened

sit on the front lawn
and watch the clouds roll on by
act as if everything is perfect
and there are no more tears to cry

still of the truth
braces the cold inside
you hold on to everything
take a deep breath and let him go
let everything go
let true love go
because in the end
it's better this way
it's been left unspoken

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  • xeroabyss II
    April 26

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    If I close my eyes, then the world will no longer be there and cease to exist (i try hard to imagine that sometimes)


  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    March 18
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    I like this style very impressive.
    thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.


  • Lexie
    February 25
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    wow i love this
    really holds a lot of meaning and so much is being expressed here

    still of the truth
    braces the cold inside

    very creative

    and i loved this part

    close the curtain
    walk off the stage
    the show is over
    and the there is no one left to play


    just grabbed my attention