Twirling
techno-bots,
part, human,
mostly not.
Flesh side tries
to conform;
weird, wild, waltz
is performed.
Emotionless,
it loses meaning,
mechanical,
with no feeling.
Spiritless,
without balance,
uneven, just
like valance.
islekine
Author notes
http://images.elfwood.com/art/r/d/rdollyvera/deep_alure.jpg.rZd.248145.jpg
so I liked the picture...but was harder to pen for than I thought!!! 
islekine
A contest entry
- An Unusual Picture by aboomer.
700 points, ended March 5, 2009, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like the title - and the way you took this into a fantasy world, like a computer game or something. I especially liked,
'Emotionless,
it loses meaning,
mechanical,
with no feeling.'
Nicely done.
thank you for your entry
best wishes in the contest
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