she goes around town like
a record skipping to hard
and fast for the heart
to count and the
mind to measure
she's got that look in her eyes
that drives all the boys wild
she's a tease
and she's gonna break you
the doctor's daughter
with one too many wishes
and few too little dreams
she's wearing her momma's
perfume and her daddy's
profession; in her veins
with that cigarette smile
she goes around and around
she's got a bucket full
of scars and a pocketful
of stories;
but we're all alright
call her what you will :;
the girl in red with a pulse so loud
she's your heart
and she's never gonna stop.
Author notes
THIS ONE IS AWKWARD AND I HATE IT. Ahhh where's my muse when I need it. -__- COME BACCCK. deletedeletedelete edit* changed it a little bit... it's better now. by littleplastichearts
A contest entry
- 75 Titles To Choose From[Prewrites Allowed Now] by stargazer..
650 points, ended April 10, 93 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think of this? ;D
Comments
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I love your wording!
"the girl in red with a pulse so loud
she's your heart
and she's never gonna stop."
I especially liked your endin. Great job (:
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Thank you so much for commenting! =] I really appreaciate it!
-peace buddy
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Great write. Loved the imagery. Powerful words with such reaction.
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awh thanks lover-lady
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Haha, why do you hate it hun?
Me likies!
I like the story told here. Creativeness! w00t w00t!
Good luck in the contest! Mucho love
♥ Katie
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eck I dunn know. It just feels sloppy and dumb.
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i hate it. >:[
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