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Beachy Fun

I sit and soak up the sun
`Til the final rays are done,
My mind wanders here and there
Without moving from the chair.

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    February 18

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    Creative write in four lines...for twelve years of age you are doing excellently!Keep penning!

    • Emmaa
      February 19
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      thanks

      thanks i am 11 i put 12 thinking you had to be on that i will have a look on your page now and comment lol i am new since yesterday night xxx

      many thanks emma devlin xxx