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You Smiled...


...at me today
and I saw myself for the first time
stripped
bare
of the self heaped critisism
and loathing
I wore like armour,
I could not have my heart
ground any further
to salt
the gaping wound it inhabited/

But...
there you were,
smiling at me
and not realising
what you were doing.

I saw myself
stripped
bare...
and for the first time
I liked myself.

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  • Demington
    February 20
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    Read it again...liked it again.

  • Demington
    February 18

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    I really have nothing to say by way of critique.

    I just like this. Plain and simple, like one of those summer days that sticks into the contours of your brain...I like it very much!

    In Christ,

    C