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Mahogany Ladder

Grown secluded, underwater,
always yearning to break out
blind but wanting to see the world.

Wallpapered surprises
  not bewildering at all;
air just a little thinner than before.

Living must have made me
darker,
just a little darker than before.

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Pic Prompt
http://jay-cougar-prints.deviantart.com/art/Tree-Cup-48390342

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  • Salty Hibiscus
    February 19, 2009
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    awesome take on the picture prompt. thank you.