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you left me in the cold

i begged you not to go
but still you walked away
you left me in the cold
with tears falling down my face
you ran right for the bus
leaving with a short embrace
you left me in the cold
with tears falling down my face
tears falling down my face

my open arms reached out to you
and words kept tumbling out
but these had no effect at all
my pleas were silent shouts
and nothing i could say or do
would get my feelings through to you

i begged you not to go
but still you turned away
you left me in the snow
with tears falling down my face
you ran right for you bus
leaving one painful embrace
you left me in the snow
with tears falling down my face
tears falling down my face

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  • Awwww
    It makes me want to give you a great big huggle!

    It's ever so good though :]

    xxxx