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Timeless Journeys

I reach into my imagination
A world I form in my creation
With timeless journeys on each footstep
Adorns each heart with no regrets

Chiming winds that breathe new life
Dancing leaves that play lullabies
None will suffer agonies
They’re not allowed in this world you see

The sun will shine for those who are frightened
As the moon will glow as lovers are hiding
And all who pray I will listen to them
And grant each wish while holding their hand

And whosoever shall battle down
I’ll jump right in and end it now
And before that day would come to an end
The two enemies will be the best of friends

I see how this world would grow
It would feed off of all the love
The grass would be made of fine silk strands
Perfect for a bed in my dreamland

The trees won’t have that old hard bark
They’re coated with velvet, soft to the heart
The mountains won’t be made of that plain old stone
They will be like diamonds catching the lights aglow

The sky will be all kinds of colors
For I will let the children paint it, then I will smile
Looking upon my masterpiece
I am very pleased with this world  I see

Lisa ‘09

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A contest entry for:
Make a New World
If you had a new planet to make a world what would it be like who would you have on it how would you make things grow I would like to know all about your world please. Please take care of your world and keep it clean.
by Sunshine Princess 850 points, ends February 19, 9 entries

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  • Titus gold member
    March 2

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    "Looking upon my masterpiece
    I am very pleased with this world I see" Wow, you seem to be blessed with eteranl youth in your soul, and the energy in this is infectious to say, you could feel the vibes off of anything you'd please. Exquisite piece indeed. It not only puts the human perspective in a place of it's own, but it blends in well with this natural spell binding metropolis of spiritual wealth. Excellente'

  • Sunshine Princess
    February 18

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    I like your world it would be nice to have world like this thank you for writing for my contest have a nice day


    • Donchaquestionme
      February 18
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      Thank you too- I loved the idea of your contest "Create a new world"- sounded wonderful to me...