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More than meets the eye

Im more then meets the eye,
Im the girl in the crowd,
Im the child learning to walk,
Smileing so proud,
Im the singer on the stage,
Im the girl in her room,
Trying hard not to cry,
Im the artist siting on the floor
Painting with dye,
Im the one with a cold heart,
Locked up tight,
In the one the stole your car last night,
Im more than meets the eye.

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  • NightWalker93
    February 18

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    woa!!!!

    i luv it!!!!!!!!!!!i really do! i think i need to start taking poetry lessons from you. lol. on how to write poetry. lol