I stand lost alone within the darkness
In the cold hallways of my heart
Looking out at life just slipping by
Unable to step out and take part
Winds blow clouds of emotion through
The the empty rooms of my soul
Looking for the path that I lost
Not knowing which way to go
Yet still I hunger to see the light
To feel once more the fire's heat
To reach out and once more to love
From the dark and lost's souls retreat
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful, Poignant, and Sentimental Artistry...
I always love reading your poems, they are so incredible!! 
Thank you once again for sharing your poetic muse with all of us!! You take care, and pen on, Poet!! 
Peace & Hugs Always,
Cyn
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the empty rooms of my soul
nice metaphor
such a sad place to be solace though you have used the words well here it shouts out lonliness and find me, deep read
abigail
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Words From The Heart
Your words reach deep within my own heart. Loving someone not with us can become very dark and lonely at times. How to move on and let go when the feelings run so deep is hard to do at times. I do believe there are those who come in our heart and never leave. The way it has to be sometimes. You do get me rambling on John.
This was so so sad yet full of love. Sounds very familiar. Very few poems bring me tears, but yours do. Love and Blessings John. Sandy
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Ahh, John, it's out there. You don't want to settle for just anything or anyone, so keep the chin up and know that your Lady is lingering out there waiting for you to find her.
I know the feelings you've written all too well- been there before.
Storm
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