only reason I stayed
was because I was afraid,
and now I have moved on,
and you deserve the fate
that you were given
forced to spend eternity
in the hell
you put me through
What do you think? Anything I can work on?
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Oh this is short sweet and to the point. This is perfect
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Thank you!
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I just commented on your other poem under a different login and like that one, this is great too! I can totally relate to this. I have been there and understand. I think this is great. short, well said and to the point! Great job!
Jessica
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