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The

only reason I stayed
was because I was afraid,
and now I have moved on,
and you deserve the fate
that you were given
forced to spend eternity
in the hell
you put me through

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  • Guerrero
    February 19
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    Oh this is short sweet and to the point. This is perfect


  • Angel Of Heaven99
    February 18

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    I just commented on your other poem under a different login and like that one, this is great too! I can totally relate to this. I have been there and understand. I think this is great. short, well said and to the point! Great job!

    Jessica