by my strength from above
through our blood, sweat and tears,
and a heart that doesn't sing
-does not matter-
what's the difference
i'm so alone
yet, without power, love and life
open, exposed
i'm no lightweight
once altogether and so many gathered 'round
there's a life that i remember
it may not mean much to you,
for me...pierces through
at the end of every day
moving from place to place,
there's a light on
and every day, i hear you say, "i love you"
Author notes
Cento Tim Johnson
Steady and Free Line 15
Entwine thee my soul Line 47
no christmas tree Line 6
eternal weeping Line 10
the truth Line 39
My Broken Heart Line 1
My House Line 6
colours revealed Line 18
cactus wings Line 21
nothing more... Line 24
there's a life i remember Line 1
i'm reaching from an ocean Line 21, 22
but i will always love you... Line 33
i fell in love...loved a life...all in a day Line 56
a dream, a whisper Line 7
live in me, i'll live in you Line 15
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This is beautiful
Where two becomes one and each day the rejoining is a blessing to behold . Keeping the love alive and mixing in laughter and family is the key to prosperity and love
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Wonderful
Very touching write. So beautifully crafted. Thank you for sharing
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Awww well this is a very lovely poem Nyetta, thank you for sharing.
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well done with purest of love evoked -- the first 2 stanzas spoken profoundly in a similar yet different context to me love held priceless eternal when unable to be together truly sends tears to the soul. well done hun and many blessings always xxxx
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Excellent!!
Oh My Word this is a Beauty ~ Love the words weaved which tugs at the Heartstrings
Precious piece and swells the eyes~ Woot!!!
You picked priceless Masterpieces Beautiful One!!
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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this make me cry..
i love the last stanza, such beautiful words.
An amazing write mommy 
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