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Burden

I never thought
that I would become
a burden,
a waste.

I got the taste of
death,
and still I can taste
it upon my tongue,
and it tastes so sweet...

I never wanted to
climb from my grave
and I just wish
that I can save
my sadness for
tomorrow...

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Random...I know it sucks...my bad...lol

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