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Absolute Peace

Away from stress,
Relaxing at last,
Breathing sweet air I very well deserve,
How mysterious it is,
That this couch and glass of cola bring me happiness,
The day has finally passed,
No longer does the day seem too long,
Now I feel timeless,
Stress-less,
Relaxed,
All from a moment of absolute peace.

A contest entry

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  • Emmyb gold member
    February 25

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    good

    Its good. it doesnt suck. at all. its very good. Simplistic, honest, charasmatic, interesting - a nice write and a strong contest entry for this particular theme. well done.

  • Judith Chandler
    February 18

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    I find sitting with any kind of beverage does it for me. You've expressed it very well, finally getting to relax, something you've been looking forward to all day.