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It's no more a flight of fancy!

Simple yet complex
Bold and sweet
Short and graceful
Dark but beautiful
Selfless still selfish
Understanding and adamant

Fascinated to see
Culmination of these adjectives
At a single point

Daydreamers build
Castles in the air
You never knew
yours was well-grounded
until the evening
I meet you online

Never had you imagined
We will meet again
You forgot your dream
Wanted me to share your life
But you had no valid reason

Your proposal attracted me
I am your better-half now
Thousand and more times
I listen to you saying
‘Oh my little sweetheart
You are the dream
I am the dreamer’

Then I wondered,
Why the heaven
I never dreamed of
Anything and anybody?

Now I realized
A dream can’t dream
About a dream!

Author notes

Quote Prompt : I am the dream you are the dreamer

Just wanted to share a few things that are personal... This quote prompt reminded me of the day on which I met my hubby... He was my fifth grader friend... after 5th std we had no opportunity to meet each other...when I met him online two years ago, on a popular social networking website, i realized that it 's been 17 years since we met... he was in all high and speechless too... I was surprised to know that he had been having a kinda spritual search of a girl with certain complex natures - having my litlle face (of a 10 year old me) in his deep heart. He didn't put much effort to find me, but he knew that his prayers would bring him soon his little Kiddy... that magic happened... now we are married.. living a beautiful dream life... everytime he sees me doing either spmething crazy or intelluctual, he used to say, You are my dream girl'..i am so lucky that my dream has come true. I used to say 'You are no more a day dreamer and I don't say you are lucky, but you deserve me' ... Hey desire, thanks for the lovely prompt...

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  • Desire gold member
    March 9

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: It's no more a flight of fancy!
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and after reading several times~ I am Honored also Humbled You took the time to pen for my contest You took the prompt and ran with it~ Bravo!!
    When I digest words written, images come through that grab hard~ I have to say- when I read Your words~
    Precious story You told and Gosh it is amazing how after all those years- the feelings- still stirred- stayed within the Heart and actually never left- what a Journey~ this misted the eyes...I imagine the Hope this gives to many thinking there is not someone out there but You have shown after many years- two can reconnect and build Dreams together~ Bravo
    Powerful verse and message You have brought forth


    These words grabbed and pulled-
    Now I realized
    A dream can’t dream
    About a dream!
    Emotional Voice spoken~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit
    also best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    with much love and light~ Desire~*~


  • Melodies
    February 23

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    Oh, a story to melt the reader's heart! I am so glad for you two. Yes, I do know it is possible to have a strong attraction for someone when you are a child. I am tutoring a young boy of only age 6 who is strongly attracted to another of my students who is 11. It is the most amazing thing to see. I love your sweet and compelling poem so much!


  • Callisto Athena gold member
    February 20

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    You are one of those rare and lucky few, Hon, to find your soulmate, for most it never happens.. This was a delightful tribute to finding that dream.. Good work!