Fuck them all! Those damn "normal" sons of bitches
When I think about how wrong they are my head itches
They call me insane when they have no such right
Well guess who's going to there house tonight?
The brilliant plot goes thorugh my head
of how my idiotic victims will soon be dead
I know what just to do to those who call me insane
I'll rip open their skull and eat up their brain!
Twelve brains in jars, and in the freezer there's twenty-four!
But after this night has come to an end, there will be even more!
You see what I do is a delicate proccess
and the skills required, only I possess!
I beat them and smash them into the ground
and then with a hammer to their head I will pound!
If the brain looks yummy...I put it onto a plate!
Oh just thinking about this makes my mouth salivate!
I cut it into thin peices with a knife to start
Eating these brains makes me even more smart!
But if it tastes nasty or if it doesn't look fair
I put it into a jar , so I can sit there and stare
You will probably be scared when your done reading this text
you have nothing to fear, YOU WILL BE NEXT!
Author notes
I worte this for the "contest serial killer signature". this is probably one of the most gorey poems I have ever written and I hope this sends chiils dwon ur spine! My name is God of Delirium
A contest entry
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what do you think?
Comments
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Its odd that I enjoyed this so much.
I liked the... "bounce" it had.
It flowed very well and, you know its a good poem
when it brings a grin to a crying girl's face
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this is scary and gory? ooook...
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what you dont think so?
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i dont think so... sorry.
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Hmm.. this is in a lot of contests which I strongly dislike but I really liked this piece. The rhyme scheme was great and the imagery was pretty scary.
The only other thing I didn't like was the beginning. It started out sounding like an immature teenage rant which it didn't follow through like.
Thanks for entering and best of luck!
-corpse
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Ahahahahaha!!!
Oh how write you are my friend.
I enjoyed this one until bitter end.
Fear I do not of your terrible tale!
Protected from all with this chain iron mail.
-grins- Well done.
~Sera
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A few spelling errors, some parts the ryhming was forced but overall a good write
Thanks for entering the contest and best of luck
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Hellish
Scary as hell brains in a jar I love this and I am not calling you insane lol awesome poem I love it another I cannot wait to read in the dark.
Good luck in the contest.
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wll dr lector i really enjoyed this horid little pice of art you wouldnt get much out of my head its all jello and mush but your poem had guts and crushing and all the good deserts for this comp thanks for etering and good luck with the skull crushing a little drink of ciante takes way that nutty taste try it trust me is gooddddd sucking lips
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"A census taker once tried to test me. I ate his liver with some fava beans and a nice chianti" Thanks for the comment....
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lol
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Very well written, and horrific. I love it, good luck and thanks for entering.
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Fuck yeah!!!
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Normal is just an illusion made up so that we have something to compare ourselves to and yet never achieve.
The Positives:
Great emotion in this also some wonderful imagery i loved it
The Negatives:
Nothing that I see great job
My Favorite Part:
I know what just to do to those who call me insane
I'll rip open their skull and eat up their brain!
Twelve brains in jars, and in the freezer there's twenty-four!
But after this night has come to an end, there will be even more!
You see what I do is a delicate proccess
and the skills required, only I possess!
This here was really great i loved it so much!!
Overall:
I give this an 8/10 you did great. I hope to see you in my future contests thanks so much for entering.
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gory and........ what to say!!
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man I have seen some sick shit in my time on this site but this takes the cake lol. i feel the same way a lot of the time and i love this poem because it is just disturbing lol. GREAT WRITE!!! 10/10
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deserved gold, scary!
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You know Joe, if you would just use a bone saw like everybody else you wouldn't get so many chips in your dinner.
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Love this. Very sick very scary.
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Very dark, sick, and twisted!! Just perfect! My brain is too little to even be an hor'dourve!Great job. Good luck in the contest.
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SICK, TWISTED AND AWSOME..I LOVED IT!!
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Good luck in the contest. I thought this poem was great. The rhyme and the flow are hauntingly elegant.
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ahahahaha, i really loved this poem. i love the rhyming and i love the signature, its so unique. the rhyme scheme also added to the downright insanity in the poem. in line 13, it should be "smash" though.
i could definitely see the raw emotion behind this, the senseless desire to murder. really well done, i wish you luck in the contest!
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brutal...
but love it!
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