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A Sweet Child Fly's To Heaven

There is so much pain
When a child has passed away
And we all wonder what is there to gain
On that day           

Heaven is what they will recieve
For the ones who loved him so
Will forever feel greif in their heart
Jesus would never hurt or decieve
That is what you need to know
The child's heart will never part
From the ones that he loves
The pain we suffer is unbearable
It should help knowing that he is up above
Way up in the sky of heaven
We can remember how they were so loveable
Some precious children don't even make it to age eleven
It is very sad to see
And we don't know why it is to be
It breaks our hearts so much
Even miss their soft hands touch
We wonder why
Heaven needed him up there
We do know that he can now fly
We say it is not fair
To take them so young at age and at heart
For the precious child we never want to part.

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  • Denerica silver member
    February 21

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    Grasping the imagery and the understanding is hard on any on us, but that is the reassurance, well written on that visual thought,wonderful dedication. Blessings.


  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    February 18
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    Just a couple things that struck my attention:

    In line 5: Is that supposed to be Heaven?
    In the Second to Last Line: You wrote "Took take.." did you mean to write "To take?"

    Other than that...I love this dedication. With a little revision, I do believe we can make it book ready. Thank you for your entry
    ~Raymond~