Sitting by my window looking out
A couple runs hand in hand
laughing as they get wet in the rain.
A young man holds open the car door for his beloved
An older couple walks hand in hand
oblivious to what is going on around them.
Laughter all around, love is in the air…
I turn around and look into my home
Its empty…… I am alone
All that is left are the broken promises of yesterday
All I see are my broken dreams…
I sit down to watch TV.
Alone again…
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it still needs work, not done yet
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White Rose wolf
this is really good and sad i would like read teh rest when you finish it and someday you will find love and be happy and never feel empty -
i so know what that feels like
i am sorry. sweeties. this write is
very sad sis, thank you so much
for stopping by,
with love and blessings
Rend
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I like this
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You have really capitalized on the bonding of those who love, and the loneliness one feels in the presence of this.....strong feelings and reflections penned here....
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Lovely Words
I can really fel the words you have penned. A very heartfelt poem. I know the feling so well. Thank you for sharing. You take care. Warm hugs and smiles. Take care.
Blessings, Sandy 
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Maybe it's because I can relate all too well with the speaker but I thought this was picture perfect.Enough is said about what's happening outside and inside the house for the image to be concrete.What I liked least was the line connecting the two parts but all I think it needs are some extra words added to it.
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A sad poem you have etched here hun
Lost and deep emotions fall
Best wishes to you
Julie x
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gosh..
this is so very sad..i like being alone..but not in this sense..i feel your pain my friend..
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