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Mrs. Taxidermist

Mountains of razor blades
and shot gun shells,
enough to kill 615
people with. But
not just any person
will do. You're a collector
of rare beauty; of exotic
lucious female flesh.

A talented murderer
with a taxidermy shop.
Normally you're stuffing
deer heads and people's
dead pets. But today
you're stuffing her breasts.
Making them fuller than before.
She screams in pain
as the needle moves
in and out of her bruising
flesh. You think you'll keep this one alive.

And show her your master
pieces. Beautiful women
all cut up and mangled. Your
life's work as an artist. Making
beauties into beasts with the
slash of a razor blade, stuffing,
and some foremaldehyde.

Maybe even make her your slave.
But she's already lost
too much blood.
And you hear the
police sirens in the background.

Goodbye Mrs. Taxidermist.

The police whisk you
off to jail. Your
fairy-tale ending of
beauties becoming the
beasts is over.
Now you wont be able
to mangle anyone's babies
anymore.

Now you're gone to
where you belong.

And your collection
burried in the ground.
Where the once living
beauties, and now
the dead beasts belong.

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  • ckwriter69
    March 4, 2009

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    This write is good, I like the upper half but I think I would make a continuing story out of this and not have her arrested quite so soon. Keep up the good writes.


    • DeadlyPoetic88
      March 5, 2009
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      I am working on a rewrite it is just not flowing quite right thanks for the comment


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    February 20, 2009

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    I like the imaginative style of wording of the story of this situation and made this a very effective poetry as well..well done indeed...


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    February 20, 2009
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    Whoa...twisted.

    mj.


    • DeadlyPoetic88
      February 20, 2009
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      yeah i tend to be very twisted poetry-wise lately and im not totally sure why lol thanks for reading


  • brokenangel78
    February 18, 2009

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    OOOOHHHH Twisted, i likes, right up my street lol
    i love the title, and the imagery is great. xxx

    • DeadlyPoetic88
      February 19, 2009
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      thanks. seems to me youre the only one that really loves my morbid stuff


  • BrokenSanity
    February 18, 2009

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    still needs work? Hmmm... perhaps if you made this flow with a spesific rhythm, it would be twice as effective, but... hehe, LOVE this murderer, I should meet them. well written, strong imagery, and.... well done.
    Keep penning, poet.

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