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Shooting Star

Missing image

Like a shooting star, that burnt too bright
you left this earth, riding angels flight.

Such an innocent child of God
reflecting soulfull eyes so old

he looks down in rays of warmth
to melt your, grieving hearts so cold.

The selfless love of a caring son
the devoted loyalty for his brother
should be cherrished in your hearts
so this grief you hold, will smother.

Be happy with the time he had
though fleeting on this earth.
Precious are these memories
for you truly know their worth..

Like double footprints in the sand
when the tide comes rushing in,
flying to heaven on wings of gold
God has washed away his sin.




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  • nicely written about an angel... nice drawing as well. Just not all that sure where the grieving comes in at.

    Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering it into my contest.


  • PoeticMadnesss
    February 22

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    wonderfully written and flows really well, and used great imagery as well. keep up the great work, and i hope you do well in the contest!


  • Denerica
    February 21
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    Beautiful flow of words and the presence or angels touched my heart here. Blessings.


  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    February 19
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    From Michael:
    "Your poem is very nice, it gives you that feeling that there are multitudes of angels flying all around us, and playing sweet music from their hearts and harps for our lost loved ones. Thank you for your poem and God Bless."


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    February 18

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    wonderful poem

    wonerfully written, nicely explained. wonderful flow of words. I love it I just don't no what to say. Very much a pleasure to read your work of art.


  • hyper thing
    February 18
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    Verry awsome write

  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    February 18

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    Very awesome write Thanks for taking the time to do so....one error in this work ...and that :

    "Preshious" should be spelled "Precious"

    Great write and thanks for entering.
    ~Raymond~

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