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Defy

Defy (Playtime’s Over)

I remember why I loved,
We display fight and saved face
In death there were no survivors
All are wrong and we got to play on
Sang our song of violent killing sprees
Hung the dead from trees
Hid your lament regret with discourse
Hollow words harrowed, nonsense

I will take everything you have
I remember why I was loved

We say as the slide nears end
What a day
Can I do it again?
They nay-say and close the day
Let’s go
We pull
Let go

Sing the song of vicious victory
We were wrong yet remain strong
Clawing the roof of the barrel
Knowing we best each day
Passing second helpings for
The fleeting light of day
One more chance to go again
To save the mind of slide’s end

Can I go again?
Don’t ask, just go
Force them to pry you away
Kick and scream
Defiant to the end
I remember why I was
Forced to pry you away
Kicking and screaming
I remember why I asked
Defiant to the end

Don’t ask, let go
Kick and scream

Defy

Author notes

I have been busy (lie) so I have been unable to find time to write. This is something I wrote trying to get back into the swing of things. Older crap of mine I feel is not as on point as this. I think This is a step forward for me but not a strong one, by any means.

Playtime's Over

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  • dillpickle62
    February 21, 2009

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    Almost sounds of military background? Or is it life experiance. Very good either way. I've both myself so I follow the lines.