I think I must walk away
There is nothing more I have to say
I think I should go
But there is one thing you must know
That I will always love you
I won't fight, I won't argue
But then, I know will always love you
Darling, memories of you I will take with me
Sweet memories of the times you loved me dearly
Will always be by my side
I failed but trust me I tried
Here is my final goodbye
Forgive me for every morsel of pain, every lie
I know I am not what you need
My heart is bleeding, but no more will I plead
I hope you walk past me leaving me behind
Never should you think of me, never in your mind
I pray you find abundant happiness
And love beautiful and faultless
With this prayer I will walk on
Please don't think of me when I am gone
I will always love you...
11TH "JANUARY" 2009
© 2006-2009 Rinzu Susan Rajan
Author notes
INSPIRED BY THE SONG "I WILL ALWAYS LOVE YOU" BY WHITNEY HOUSTON
A contest entry
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'Darling, memories of you I will take with me
Sweet memories of the times you loved me dearly
Will always be by my side'
wow, an excellent write.
thanks so much for sharing,
thanks for entering& good luck -
Wow! I haven't written these exact words before. Sometimes it is better just to move on yet, at the time it doesn't seem so.
Thank you for commenting on my poem "The Real Me"
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very nice i love the flow this is a great piece of work keep up the great work...
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Finals
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That was in my last contest
but i think it works a lot better in this one
Like i said in last contest really deep shows alot of emotions Great write
And Thank You for entering
again I'm happy you did
Good Luck
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Another deep poem
"I think I must walk away
There is nothing more I have to say
I think I should go
But there is one thing you must know
That I will always love you
I won't fight, I won't argue
But then, I know will always love you"
Having the strength to walk away from the one you love
This is really good shows a lot of emotion
Great write and Thank you for entering
my contest Good luck
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I really enjoyed this poem. Well written with emotion.
Michael
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Hello
This is a poem i can really relate to, nothing comes close to what i feel now, if i wrote a poem this is how i would written it cuz nothing could express how i feel but this poem. it's amazing -
Awwww
This is very sweet, and its something I can relate too, and I love the song you have choosen.
Very good write.
Good luck in my contest
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