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Angels

God sends angels to do his work
Sometimes here for a long time
Sometimes their time is very short
We love and cherish our angels
And miss them when they are gone
Not realizing God just called him home

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  • PoeticMadnesss
    February 22

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    such a profound message in a short poem. you did such an amazing job on this poem, keep up the great work, and good luck in the contest!

    i just ask you change the link colors from white, its going to be hard for me to navigate my way out of here. XD


  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    February 19
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    From Michael:
    "You have alot of understanding and faithfulness. Thank you..."


  • poet360
    February 18
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    this is so good!!


  • Rose Angel gold member
    February 18

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    Oooh.....I do love this write on angels....So well written...Inspirational and full of wisdom....This is bookmarked, luv!


  • Denerica
    February 18
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    Beautiful, short but of truth and sentiment.Blessings.


  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    February 18
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    Um... wow Thats all I can say, thanks for your entry!

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