paste to floor wondering
of a time thats mine
thinking out loud
but not along
looking for away out of
a dream that cant come true
but the wish is mine to keep
diary of a daydreamer
A contest entry
- coffee-cup crumbs: by Randomly Beautiful.
700 points, ended March 24, 2009, 37 entries
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nicely written. It seemed thoughtful,and drifting. I enjoyed this one as well. keep up the writing.
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I loved this piece, short, but sweet and full of dreams.
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diary of a day dreamer..what a strong line you conceived..itself is a complete poetry is here in this line..a strong connection yu dealt with the poetry..
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nicely written but I wonder is the word paste that you are looking for... how about pace or pacing... I paste is like gluing something. Pacing is wondering back and forth on the floor. That is if I am correct. So you might want to check that out. Other than that I can't find anything wrong with this write. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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Diary of a Daydreamer
......Beautiful, a dream you cannot touch is something we all share in common.
"looks off into the distance of the stars, they seem rather far away tonight"
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